Five, Seven, Five!

I don't get it. What are the rules to write a correct one ?

A lip that inflates

Bloody teeth out of the mouth

My fist in your face



Am I doing it right ?

The first line is preferred to refer to one of the seasons, or it may be a natural scene. Not a thumb rule in western haikus, but adds a challenge if you accept. :)



All the seasons pass

Waiting for Planetside is

Heartbreakingly fun.



The last line often adds a new layer to the picture built in the first two lines - it is often contraversal, or gives a different aspect of meaning.



Fallen leaves rot

At my feet. So will our lives

Wait for the respawn.



(english is not my native, can make much better in hungarian. :) )